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Menel could use one of these o/

Post by Menel on Wed Jun 10, 2015 5:01 am



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Re: Menel could use one of these o/

Post by Aziel on Fri Jun 12, 2015 7:55 pm

Howdy! So I ready over precious bb menel (so glad yukia isnt here to ruin his life so b) and really the only change you need to make is to skills! In regards to Cleansing Flame I've already talked to Seb about healing but I have really strict limitations on it, and I don't think it goes with fire (outside of cauterizing wounds but that's not healing so much as putting the flesh back together to stop bleeding.) It also probably wouldn't heal someone if you jammed your sword into them, since the flames aren't the blade itself, they just run along it.

Also, we don't have a battle system right now so Inner Flame and Strength of Flame, you're increased speed skill and increased strength skill, are okay on the grounds that they don't actually boost your stats! They'd do a temporary increase of static damage for a turn or two, if you know what I mean.

Everything else looks good! Let me know when you've made the changes/what you've changed it to, I'll review it and if it's alright, then Menel is approved. c:


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Post by Menel on Fri Jun 12, 2015 8:45 pm

I didn't really actually include any changes to his stats in the description (ie: via numbers or whatever) and figured it's mostly rp related like a sudden surge of strength or moving more quickly etc. So if that's alright I don't really need to change it. Besides which coming up with magical skills for Menel is REALLY difficult.

As for his healing skill... I've always considered fire to be a healing thing personally (like the idea of warmth flooding someone's body and repairing damage, which is why I described the effect as like a cool flame). I could change the description a bit so that it's more like his other physical skills save like he's doing it to someone else. So that rather than flooding his own body with flames that help him he does it to someone else? --- Mostly the idea of him shoving his blade into someone for it was mostly for theatrics/reducing the chance that he'd actually USE the skill.

Anyways, let me know what you think o/


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Post by Aziel on Fri Jun 12, 2015 9:13 pm

I know you didn't include stats in the description, I just wanted to let you know that it wouldn't alter stats. If that's okay with you, it's fine as it is!

As for healing skill, it's really good that fire is healing for you but I'm still reserving physical wound/hp healing, disease curing on the site for the water or soul elements, or making it something else entirely (haven't decided yet.) if he impales his sword into someone it's definitely going to hurt them. The element doesn't come from the weapon; it comes from within. So while it's totally fine to have your fire engulf the swords if they're in Menel's hands, at the end of the day they're still basic tools so stabbing someone with them would be pretty painful. Sorry ;_; That one will still need to be edited. Otherwise you're good!


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Post by Menel on Fri Jun 12, 2015 9:20 pm

Since your saying that fire can't heal then there's no reason for me to edit it really. So I just deleted the whole skill.

I really can't think of anything at all to give him that he'd want or use at all. His element-based skills aren't really something I'm that concerned about anyways so o/

If he absolutely needs to have five skills to be approved I guess we'll have to throw this on pause because I'm stumped.


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Post by Aziel on Fri Jun 12, 2015 10:01 pm

Nope, he doesn't by any means have to have five skills! And in the future if you decide on a skill you'd like to add, throw a request in and I'll look over it and open your profile for you to edit the skill in. c: Likewise if any of your current skills change! \o/ So then Menel is approved~


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Post by Menel on Fri Jun 12, 2015 10:16 pm

Alright. Thanks o/


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