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EY YO BOSS

Post by Laven on Thu Oct 22, 2015 2:40 am

GOT ANOTHER SON FOR YOU TO LOOK OVER OKAY?

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Re: EY YO BOSS

Post by Menel on Thu Oct 22, 2015 2:51 am

Okay so: You actually have 30 skill points to spend total and you've only spent 25 which means you can add another 5 to him!

His allegiance is marked by if he actively has faith and worships so you can mark him as being unaligned as far as that goes but bearing the appropriate mark.

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The only one that I would suggest a mild change in is the specific wording of Dance of Curse:
Dance of Curse
An AoE attack that can stun up to four targets in a three meter range around Laven. A burst of pressurized air attempts to knock his foes to the ground and inflict damage at the same time. If his targets are stunned the effect lasts for one round. Damage can be inflicted even if stunning fails.
Perhaps clarify: Targets may be stunned for one round, damage can be inflicted even if stunning fails.

As it's worded now it's less clear if the stunning happens at all or when.

Other than that I think this looks perfect! I'll drop our Admin a line and hopefully get this double-checked <3


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Re: EY YO BOSS

Post by Laven on Thu Oct 22, 2015 2:59 am

Updated according to Elm's suggestions! WAITING ON YOU, BOSS.
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Re: EY YO BOSS

Post by Aziel on Tue Oct 27, 2015 5:29 pm

Diane and i discussed [s]the sexy elf[/s] Laven, the appropriate changes have been made and this character is accepted! C:


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